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題目：應用文寫作（滿分15分）
假定你是李華，準備參加學校組織的英文詩朗誦比賽。請給外教George寫封郵件求助，內容包括：
1. 說明比賽要求；
2. 請他推薦英文詩；
3. 請教朗誦技巧。
注意：
1. 寫作詞數應為80左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
Dear Mr. George,
I』m writing to ask for your help.
________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
題型解讀
應用文寫作主要考查學生英語語言的實際應用能力，該題型寫作目的明確，測試學生在實際生活情景下運用英語傳達信息、表達觀點的能力，題目側重英語語言的交際性和實用性。應用文寫作文體以書信（郵件）類為主，這類應用文通常出現提綱式要點，話題常與學生的校園生活相關。此次八省聯考英語寫作部分第一題應用文寫作考查的方向是求助信。這對學生作文訓練的全面性和靈活性是一個挑戰。
推薦詞彙和句型
求助信是向對方求助，所以言辭要誠懇，如實說出自己的現狀以及求助內容，一般分為三個部分，即說明寫信目的、描述所遇問題、表達期望。其中「寫信目的」和「表達期望」可以使用如下的一些常用句式進行展開：
【寫信目的】
1. I』m writing to ask for your help.
我寫信的目的是尋求你的幫助。
2. I wonder if you can offer me some tips on… .
我想知道你能否給我一些關於……的建議。
3. I am writing in the hope that you can give me some advice on…
我寫信是希望你能給我一些關於……的建議。
4. Would you be kind enough to give me a hand with the following problems?
你能幫我解決下面的問題嗎?
【表達期望】
1. I』d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance.
如果你能給我一些指導，我會很感激的。
2. I am eager to get your timely help.
我渴望得到你及時的幫助。
3. I will be grateful if you can spare time to give me a hand.
如果你能抽出時間幫助我，我將不勝感激。
範文
Dear Mr. George,I』m writing to ask for your help.I am eager to enter for the English Poetry Declamation Contest our school will be holding next weekend. The theme must be related to nature. Each competitor will be given five minutes to read. Would you please be so kind as to give me some recommendations for poems? If it’s not too much to ask, could I also ask you for tips to polish my performance? Any advice on declamation, including pronunciation and intonation, would be helpful.I』d appreciate it if you could give me some guidance. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
題目：讀後續寫（滿分25分）
閱讀下面短文，根據所給情節進行續寫，使之構成一個完整的故事。
During this past year, I』ve had three instances of car trouble. Each time these things happened, I was sick of the way most people hadn』t bothered to help. One of those times, I was on the side of the road for close to three hours with my big Jeep. I put signs in the windows, big signs that said NEED A JACK（千斤頂）, and offered money. Nothing. Right as I was about to give up, a Mexican family in a small truck pulled over, and the father bounded out.
He sized up the situation and called for his daughter, who spoke English. He conveyed through her that he had a jack but that it was too small for the Jeep, so we would need something to support it. Then he got a saw（鋸子）from the truck and cut a section out of a big log on the side of the road. We rolled it over and put his jack on top, and we were in business.
I started taking the wheel off, and then, if you can believe it, I broke his tire iron. No worries: He handed it to his wife, and she was gone in a flash down the road to buy a new tire iron. She was back in 15 minutes. We finished the job, and I was a very happy man.
The two of us were dirty and sweaty. His wife prepared a pot of water for us to wash our hands. I tried to put a $20 bill in the man’s hand, but he wouldn』t take it, so instead I went up to the truck and gave it to his wife as quietly as I could. I asked the little girl where they lived. Mexico, she said. They were in Oregon so Mommy and Daddy could work on a fruit farm for the next few weeks. Then they would go home.
注意：
1. 續寫詞數應為150左右；
2. 請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I』d had lunch.
__________________________
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.
___________________________
題型解讀
讀後續寫作為新高考英語的創新題型出現，主要考查學生對英語的綜合運用能力和創新性思維能力。具體而言，讀後續寫要求考生在給定的時間內讀懂原文，並能把握原文的關鍵信息和語言特點；在續寫部分做到想像合理，銜接連貫，內容飽滿；在語言應用上，強調語言使用的豐富性和準確性，要求考生靈活使用高級詞彙和複雜句式。在行文邏輯方面，要求考生進行合理的想像，並恰當地使用一定的銜接手段，使行文連貫。
續寫思路分析：
通過梳理故事的情感線和劇情線，可以得出如下的思維導圖：
範文1
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I』d had lunch.My gut feeling was to refuse. But my stomach was growling since I hadn』t eaten for more than four hours. Seeing my embarrassment, the girl just pressed some bread into my hands and changed the subject to talk about my car. After the seemingly simple meal which pulled us closer together, the family was ready to leave. When the father started his truck, the little angel handed me a paper bag, then waved goodbye to me. I stood and watched the truck until it vanished around a turn.
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.The fruit inside didn』t look perfect, but the tantalizing aroma filled the air. Picking one up to take a big bite, I found a $20 bill in the bag. Recalling their sincere eyes and smiles while chewing the juicy fruit, I felt the warmth flowing into my heart. Certainly, I』ve encountered many indifferent people and I』ve experienced some helpless moments, but I still put my trust in this beautiful world. Because I finally realized one thing that stands the brunt of life throughout its course: a kind heart. (177 words)
出彩表達積累
1. gut adj. 本能的
2. growl v. 低聲吼叫
3. vanish v. 突然消失
4. tantalize v. 逗引，招惹
5. aroma n. 芳香；香味
6. indifferent adj. 漠不關心
7. stand the brunt of sth. 首當其衝
8. When the father started his truck, the little angel handed me a paper bag, then waved goodbye to me.
當那位父親發動他的卡車時，小天使遞給我一個紙袋，然後向我揮手告別。（對動作的生動描寫）
9. Recalling their sincere eyes and smiles while chewing the juicy fruit, I felt the warmth flowing into my heart.
咀嚼著多汁的水果，回憶著他們真誠的眼神和微笑，我感到溫暖流進了我的心裡。（對神態的生動描寫）
範文2
When I was about to say goodbye, the girl asked if I』d had lunch.Before I could speak, my stomach answered in a delighted grumble. After ages of hopelessly waiting and an hour of hard work, my body was desperate for fuel. The girl giggled and led me to their truck. There I saw a small portable table. I must have said 「thank you」 a thousand times during the meal. The father simply smiled and patted my shoulder. His wife gestured to the dishes. 「This one good?」 she asked. And then I was handed a paper bag filled with Mexican delicacies.
After they left, I got into my Jeep and opened the paper bag.Lying on top of the food was my $20 bill. I immediately looked around for the truck, but it was long gone. Since then, each time I drove past a fruit farm, I would look for a small truck and the family with a heart of gold. But weeks passed with fruitless searches. In the meantime, I began to help travelers with car problems, all for free. I stopped whining and seized every chance to pass on kindness; kindness I hope will reach these good people one day. (175 words)
出彩表達積累
1. grumble n. 咕隆聲；隆隆聲
2. giggle v. （因感到有趣、窘迫或緊張而）咯咯地笑；傻笑
3. portable adj. 可攜式的；輕便的
4. pat v. （喜愛地）輕拍
5. gesture v. 做手勢；用動作示意
6. delicacy n. 精美的食物；佳肴
7. whine v. 哭哭啼啼；哭嚷
8. a heart of gold 善良的心
9. Before I could speak, my stomach answered in a delighted grumble.
我還沒開口，我的肚子用開心的咕隆聲作了回答。（擬人的生動描寫）
10. After ages of hopelessly waiting and an hour of hard work, my body was desperate for fuel.
經過長久的無望等待以及一小時的辛苦工作，我的身體極度需要補充能量。（誇張和比喻的生動描寫）
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