"老師,為什麼我的英語作文分數會低?"
"老師,英語書面表達要獲取高分,有什麼訣竅?"
"老師,我的英語作文都是按照要求寫的,為什麼沒有獲得高分?"
這是近期收到的學生有關書面表達的留言。書面表達在英語考試中所占比重較大,也是很多同學望而生畏的題型,但再難的題目,都用相應的解決辦法,如在寫作中用一些高分亮點詞彙,更容易在眾多的試卷中脫穎而出,引起閱卷老師的關注。
下面是小天為大家整理的常用寫作高分詞彙,幫助同學們衝刺英語寫作高分。
01來臨,靠近
普通常見詞:come
高分亮點詞:approach
例:As Teachers' Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day.
教師節臨近,我們班決定舉辦一個聚會來慶祝這個重要的節日。
02 吸引
普通常見詞:attract
高分亮點詞:appeal to
例:I'm sure it will appeal to you, for you have been enthusiastic about sports.
我相信它會吸引你,因為你熱愛運動。
03 我認為,在我看來
普通常見詞:in my opinion
高分亮點詞:in my view, from my point of view, it seems to me,personally, as far as I'm concerned, as far as I can see
例:From my point of view, not only can the approach prevent them wasting precious time in class, but also arouse their interest in reading good books.
在我看來,這個方法不但可以防止浪費課堂的寶貴時間,還能引起他們閱讀好書的興趣。
04眾所周知
普通常見詞:as we all know
高分亮點詞:it is well known that, as is well known, as everyone knows
例:It's well known that China is a country with long history.
眾所周知,中國一個有悠久歷史的國家。
05導致,引起
普通常見詞:cause
高分亮點詞:lead to, result in, contribute to, bring about
例:They said that large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.
他們表示,大量的遊客湧入動物園會引起交通堵塞。
06增強,改善
普通常見詞:increase, improve
高分亮點詞:build up, strengthen, better
例:Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind. 運動有助我們強健體魄,保持清醒的頭腦。
07使用,利用
普通常見詞:use
高分亮點詞: make use of, take advantage of, employ, adopt, apply
例:Please take advantage of these if you have any questions or doubts.
如果你還有任何問題或懷疑,請利用這些。
08遵守
普通常見詞:follow
高分亮點詞:observe, obey
例:It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
遵守社會秩序,行進正確的軌道是每個人的職責。
09理解,了解
普通常見詞:understand
高分亮點詞:have an understanding of sth, digest, comprehend, relate to
例:I think it is important for children to have brothers and sisters they can relate to.
我認為對孩子們來講有可以相互理解溝通的兄弟姐妹很重要。
10可以,(使) 能夠
普通常見詞:can
高分亮點詞:be able to, enable, allow
例:Students' Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies.
學生之聲讓我們能夠自由表達對生活和學習想法和感受。
11似乎,好像
普通常見詞:seem
高分亮點詞:appear, as if / though
例:It appears that I have left my dictionary in your home.
我好像把字典落在家裡了。
12感激的
普通常見詞:be thankful
高分亮點詞:be grateful, I would appreciate it if...
例:I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.如果你能幫助我,我將會非常感激。
13高興的
普通常見詞:I'm glad to ...
高分亮點詞:I'm pleased to ..., I'm delighted to...
例:About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Lisa.
大約三年前,我很開心了解到白雲有了自己的女兒Lisa。
14擅長……,哪方面做的好
普通常見詞:be good at English
高分亮點詞:have a good command / grasp of English
例: I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
我英語學得很好,被選為了英語課代表。
15習慣做某事
普通常見詞:(be) used to (doing) sth
高分亮點詞:(be) accustomed to (doing) sth
例: They are never accustomed to sleeping late.
他們從來都不習慣晚睡。
16重要
普通常見詞:be important,
高分亮點詞:be of importance/ significance/interest/benefit
例: Developing a good habit is also of great importance.
養成一個好習慣非常重要。
17有幫助,有作用,有意義
普通常見詞:be very useful, be good for
高分亮點詞:be of great use / benefit / value, be beneficial / valuable / meaningful
例:The technology can be of great value for research as well.
技術也是,對於研究來說價值無窮。
18舉辦聚會
普通常見詞:have a party
高分亮點詞:hold / throw / organize a party
例:We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.
我們為小明的生日舉辦了一個驚喜的聚會。
19被認為是……
普通常見詞:be thought to be
高分亮點詞:be acknowledged to be, be regarded / seen as, be considered (to be)
例:Panda is so lovely that brings fun to people and they are regarded as the treasure of our country.
熊貓如此可愛,可以給人們帶來樂趣,被認為是我國的國寶。
20人們普遍認為……
普通常見詞:It's generally believed that
高分亮點詞:It's generally accepted / agreed / assumed that
例:It is generally accepted that a boy must learn to stand up like a man.
人們普遍認為男孩子要像一個男人一樣站起來。
學習就要運用,不能只停留在"哦,是這樣子啊。"只有運用起來,熟練了,才能在考試中應用自如,現在就來實踐一下吧。
假定你是中學生李華,家住泉州。你的英國筆友Jason來信談到了他的家鄉倫敦,並希望了解你的家鄉泉州的情況。請你用英文寫一封回信。
回信必須包括以下內容:
1.自然情況:地理位置優越、氣候風景宜人等;
2.發展成就:經濟發展迅速、城市高樓林立等;
3.存在問題:交通擁堵現象、空氣污染問題等;
4.對泉州發展的看法:內容由考生自己擬定。
要求:
1.詞數100左右;
2.可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。
範文:
Dear Jason,
I'm more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been set up, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. An increasing number of schools and hospitals are available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and attractive/charming city.
However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence on people's daily life.
As far as I am concerned, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.
Yours,
Li Hua
詞彙是句子的組成部分,也是句子的靈魂,在寫作中增加亮點詞彙,不僅可以使表達更高級,還能讓閱卷老師對你青睞有佳,這樣一來,獲得寫作高分也是情理之中的事情。