"老师,为什么我的英语作文分数会低?"
"老师,英语书面表达要获取高分,有什么诀窍?"
"老师,我的英语作文都是按照要求写的,为什么没有获得高分?"
这是近期收到的学生有关书面表达的留言。书面表达在英语考试中所占比重较大,也是很多同学望而生畏的题型,但再难的题目,都用相应的解决办法,如在写作中用一些高分亮点词汇,更容易在众多的试卷中脱颖而出,引起阅卷老师的关注。
下面是小天为大家整理的常用写作高分词汇,帮助同学们冲刺英语写作高分。
01来临,靠近
普通常见词:come
高分亮点词:approach
例:As Teachers' Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day.
教师节临近,我们班决定举办一个聚会来庆祝这个重要的节日。
02 吸引
普通常见词:attract
高分亮点词:appeal to
例:I'm sure it will appeal to you, for you have been enthusiastic about sports.
我相信它会吸引你,因为你热爱运动。
03 我认为,在我看来
普通常见词:in my opinion
高分亮点词:in my view, from my point of view, it seems to me,personally, as far as I'm concerned, as far as I can see
例:From my point of view, not only can the approach prevent them wasting precious time in class, but also arouse their interest in reading good books.
在我看来,这个方法不但可以防止浪费课堂的宝贵时间,还能引起他们阅读好书的兴趣。
04众所周知
普通常见词:as we all know
高分亮点词:it is well known that, as is well known, as everyone knows
例:It's well known that China is a country with long history.
众所周知,中国一个有悠久历史的国家。
05导致,引起
普通常见词:cause
高分亮点词:lead to, result in, contribute to, bring about
例:They said that large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams.
他们表示,大量的游客涌入动物园会引起交通堵塞。
06增强,改善
普通常见词:increase, improve
高分亮点词:build up, strengthen, better
例:Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind. 运动有助我们强健体魄,保持清醒的头脑。
07使用,利用
普通常见词:use
高分亮点词: make use of, take advantage of, employ, adopt, apply
例:Please take advantage of these if you have any questions or doubts.
如果你还有任何问题或怀疑,请利用这些。
08遵守
普通常见词:follow
高分亮点词:observe, obey
例:It is everybody's duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.
遵守社会秩序,行进正确的轨道是每个人的职责。
09理解,了解
普通常见词:understand
高分亮点词:have an understanding of sth, digest, comprehend, relate to
例:I think it is important for children to have brothers and sisters they can relate to.
我认为对孩子们来讲有可以相互理解沟通的兄弟姐妹很重要。
10可以,(使) 能够
普通常见词:can
高分亮点词:be able to, enable, allow
例:Students' Voice will allow us to freely express our thoughts and feelings about our lives and studies.
学生之声让我们能够自由表达对生活和学习想法和感受。
11似乎,好像
普通常见词:seem
高分亮点词:appear, as if / though
例:It appears that I have left my dictionary in your home.
我好像把字典落在家里了。
12感激的
普通常见词:be thankful
高分亮点词:be grateful, I would appreciate it if...
例:I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand.如果你能帮助我,我将会非常感激。
13高兴的
普通常见词:I'm glad to ...
高分亮点词:I'm pleased to ..., I'm delighted to...
例:About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Lisa.
大约三年前,我很开心了解到白云有了自己的女儿Lisa。
14擅长……,哪方面做的好
普通常见词:be good at English
高分亮点词:have a good command / grasp of English
例: I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.
我英语学得很好,被选为了英语课代表。
15习惯做某事
普通常见词:(be) used to (doing) sth
高分亮点词:(be) accustomed to (doing) sth
例: They are never accustomed to sleeping late.
他们从来都不习惯晚睡。
16重要
普通常见词:be important,
高分亮点词:be of importance/ significance/interest/benefit
例: Developing a good habit is also of great importance.
养成一个好习惯非常重要。
17有帮助,有作用,有意义
普通常见词:be very useful, be good for
高分亮点词:be of great use / benefit / value, be beneficial / valuable / meaningful
例:The technology can be of great value for research as well.
技术也是,对于研究来说价值无穷。
18举办聚会
普通常见词:have a party
高分亮点词:hold / throw / organize a party
例:We're throwing a surprise party for Xiaoming's birthday.
我们为小明的生日举办了一个惊喜的聚会。
19被认为是……
普通常见词:be thought to be
高分亮点词:be acknowledged to be, be regarded / seen as, be considered (to be)
例:Panda is so lovely that brings fun to people and they are regarded as the treasure of our country.
熊猫如此可爱,可以给人们带来乐趣,被认为是我国的国宝。
20人们普遍认为……
普通常见词:It's generally believed that
高分亮点词:It's generally accepted / agreed / assumed that
例:It is generally accepted that a boy must learn to stand up like a man.
人们普遍认为男孩子要像一个男人一样站起来。
学习就要运用,不能只停留在"哦,是这样子啊。"只有运用起来,熟练了,才能在考试中应用自如,现在就来实践一下吧。
假定你是中学生李华,家住泉州。你的英国笔友Jason来信谈到了他的家乡伦敦,并希望了解你的家乡泉州的情况。请你用英文写一封回信。
回信必须包括以下内容:
1.自然情况:地理位置优越、气候风景宜人等;
2.发展成就:经济发展迅速、城市高楼林立等;
3.存在问题:交通拥堵现象、空气污染问题等;
4.对泉州发展的看法:内容由考生自己拟定。
要求:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
范文:
Dear Jason,
I'm more than happy to hear from you and know about your beautiful home city London. Now I'd like to tell you something about my hometown Quanzhou.
Quanzhou is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly during the past ten years. New bridges and roads have been set up, highrise buildings standing in many parts of the city. An increasing number of schools and hospitals are available for the native people. It is developing into a modern and attractive/charming city.
However, there are still some problems, such as heavy traffic in rush hours and severe air pollution, which have a bad influence on people's daily life.
As far as I am concerned, Quanzhou should develop healthily and scientifically, so that we could have a better hometown in future.
Yours,
Li Hua
词汇是句子的组成部分,也是句子的灵魂,在写作中增加亮点词汇,不仅可以使表达更高级,还能让阅卷老师对你青睐有佳,这样一来,获得写作高分也是情理之中的事情。
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