高中英語寫作指導:如何向外國人介紹中國旅遊景點(附高分範文)

2019-12-05     英語周報


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如何介紹旅遊景點

【寫作任務】

假定你是李華。你的英國朋友Bob打算暑期來貴州旅遊,來信向你了解著名旅遊景點——梵凈山的情況。請你根據所給提示給他回一封電子郵件。

1. 位於貴州省銅仁市,海拔2572米;

2. 風光秀麗,珍稀動植物種類繁多;

3. 著名五大佛教聖地(Buddhist holy site)之一;

4. 2018年7月入選世界遺產名錄(the World Heritage List)。

注意:1. 詞數100左右(開頭和結尾已給出,但不計入總詞數);2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

Dear Bob,

__________________________________________

__________________________________________

__________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

【寫作指導】

一、審題定調

本寫作任務要求給英國朋友Bob寫一封郵件,介紹旅遊景點梵凈山的相關情況,信件內容屬於說明文。

旅遊景點介紹通常按照以下步驟展開:首先,介紹旅遊景點概況(如地理位置、占地面積等);其次,說明其特別之處(如代表性景點、歷史價值或突出的人文特色等);最後,總結陳述以吸引讀者的遊玩興趣。

二、謀篇布局

該寫作任務可分為三部分:

第一部分:引出話題,說明寫信目的;

第二部分:根據所給提示介紹景點;

第三部分:總結評價並表達祝願。

三、組織語言

第一部分:引出話題,說明寫信目的。

第二部分:根據所給提示介紹景點。

第三部分:總結評價並表達祝願。

【範文展示】

普通範文

Dear Bob,

I'm glad to hear that you'll come to Guizhou for your summer holiday. I'm writing to tell you more about Fanjing Mountain.

Fanjing Mountain lies in Tongren City, Guizhou Province, and it is 2,572 meters above sea level. The scenery there is very beautiful. There are many kinds of rare plants and animals. What's more important, it is also one of the five most famous Buddhist holy sites and has many fantastic traditional temples. In addition, it was added to the World Heritage List in July, 2018.

You'll have a good time there, I promise you!

Yours,

Li Hua

高級範文

Dear Bob,

I'm delighted to learn you've chosen Guizhou as your summer holiday destination. I'd like to offer you some information about Fanjing Mountain.

Fanjing Mountain, 2,572 meters above sea level, is located in Tongren City, Guizhou Province. The scene there is beyond description and there exists a variety of precious plants and animals. Apart from the impressive scenery, Fanjing Mountain, one of the five most famous Buddhist holy sites, has a good number of temples in typical Chinese style. Thanks to its special characteristics, it was placed on the World Heritage List in July, 2018.

I do believe a trip to Fanjing Mountain would be a feast for your eyes. Wish you a nice trip!

Yours,

Li Hua

【實戰演練】

假定你是李華。你的美國朋友Lucy想來廬山遊玩,來信向你了解廬山的一些基本情況。請你根據所給提示給她回一封電子郵件。

1. 位於江西北部,海拔高達1474米;

2. 風景優美,氣候溫和;

3. 歷史悠久,詩歌流芳;

4. 1996年被列入世界遺產名錄。

注意:1. 詞數100左右(開頭和結尾已給出,但不計入總詞數);2. 可以適當增加細節,以使行文連貫。

Dear Lucy,

_________________________________________

_________________________________________

_________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

答案

Dear Lucy,

I'm glad to hear that you're interested in Mount Lushan. I'd like to offer you some information about it.

Mount Lushan, which reaches as high as 1,474 meters above sea level, is located in the north of Jiangxi Province. The weather there is mild all the year round. Not only can you admire the impressive scenery, but also learn more about its long history. Moreover, lots of poems have been written about it. Mount Lushan was placed on the World Heritage List in 1996, which made it famous all over the world.

There's no doubt that a trip to Mount Lushan will be a truly unforgettable experience.

Yours,

Li Hua

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